Spring
was upon the lush island of Gawanee, and so was the Festival of First Blooming.
The annual celebration offered a rare opportunity for peasants to rejoice, pray
for the good crops in the upcoming year, as well as the general prosperity.
Aside of marvelous foods and numerous attractions, there was a sacred, ancient
tradition of a Bridal Dance. Young maidens swirled on a stage, amazing
spectators with their beauty and grace. Engagements followed, accompanied by
heated negotiations about the value of dowries.
All
girls of marriageable age practiced the complicated dance steps – all save one.
Hurriedly sticking a masculine hat onto what remained of her once long hair,
Tala sprinted across the fields. Panting from effort, she glanced over her
shoulders to see if her pursuers were on her trail. They were gaining on her.
She clenched her teeth, forcing herself to keep the fast pace.
As soon
as she got into the port town, Tala leaned heavily against a wall of the
nearest building. She wiped streamlets of sweat running down her face. Her
brother’s shirt glued to her damp back. Despite her exhaustion, she ran the
last stretch to the wharf. A military transport ship was already prepared to
sail out. Last sacks with food for the soldiers were being carried aboard. The
ship was about to carry Tala toward her dreams and her destiny.
She
hurried to a man standing by the gangway. With a nervous smile, she handed him
a document with the governor’s seal.
“My name
is Cas, son of Hester and Babak.” Tala gave her brother’s name. “Here’s my
permit to leave Gawanee.”
The man
scrutinized the document, playing with it for a while before he broke the seal.
“It
looks genuine,” he commented before reading.
Tala
smirked with pride. Of course it does. I
spent all night forging it.
“So,
you’re going to Rakesh to enroll in the Imperial Academy.” The man muttered.
Tala
nodded eagerly. Her eyes glittered with enthusiasm.
“I’ll
use my intellect to faithfully serve the Empire!” She performed a salute, or
rather a caricature of it.
“I
suppose the Sun Empire needs weird people too,” the man by the gangway said. He
offered Tala a brief, official smile and moved out of her way.
Tala set
her foot on the rocking gangway. She held her breath, about to take the first
step into her bright future. Her happiness was not to last though. Just as she
was finally about to on embark the ship to Rakesh, accompanied by the sacks of
cabbages, an all-too-familiar shriek ruined her hope.
“Tala!”
It was her mother calling.
The
pursue caught up to her. Flanked by Tala’s father and brother, her mom sprinted
toward the wharf. In one hand she held a wicker picnic basket and a severed
auburn braid in the other. The day before it had been attached to the rest of
Tala’s hair.
“Stop my
daughter!” Her mother cried desperately.
“Daughter?”
The man overseeing embarking the cargo ship furrowed his brows in confusion. He
stared at Tala, clearly baffled.
She
shrugged her shoulders, pretending she was as clueless as he was. Patting her
flat chest, she proved she was no daughter. The lack of feminine curves could
be useful sometimes. Tala turned her back on her family to hurry on board.
However, she ran out of luck.
“Wait!”
The man guarding the gangway blocked her path with his arm. He scrutinized her,
as suspicion budded in his mind. “Pull off your pants.”
“What?”
Tala took a step back, grabbing her belt protectively. She stepped off the
gangway, away from the man, who demanded her to strip. Unfortunately, she fell
straight into the clutches of her overbearing mother.
“Aren’t
you supposed to be in Hereen?” Tala’s mother assaulted her with questions. “You know, rehearsing for the dance with the
other girls? Looking for a suitable husband?”
Tala
shivered instantly at the mere mention of the prospect of marriage. Becoming
saddled with cooking, cleaning and giving birth to a herd of children wasn’t
exactly her idea of a fulfilling life. She had different plans entirely, much
to her family’s despair.
“Don’t worry, we’ll somehow stick your braid
back on.” Tala’s mom massaged her aching
temples. “Just remember to smile tomorrow and you’ll do fine. I know it will be
your fourth Bridal Dance, but this year will be different.”
That’s what I’m afraid of.
“Mom, I
don’t want to be a bride,” Tala said calmly, but firmly.
“Sure
you do. Every girl does.” Her mother lovingly caressed her cheek, wiping off
some nonexistent smudge. “You’re just young and confused.”
“I’m not
confused. I know exactly what my goal is and it’s not marriage.” Tala couldn’t
have stated her desires more clearly. Moreover, she was genuinely proud with
the way she conveyed them, like an adult should; civilized, without making a
scene.
“Honey,
do you want to be an old maiden, like aunt Anisa? With the war against Tayann,
there aren’t many bachelors to choose from! Of course, you want to marry.” Tala’s mother reasoned with her
stubbornly.
“I know
what I want!” Tala yelled. Surprised by her own outburst, she stumbled back,
covering her mouth with her hand. It was the first time she shouted at her
mother.
While
the women were making ruckus, all men – Tala’s relatives, the soldier and the
ship’s entire crew stared at them curiously. The military man turned to Babak,
the unfortunate father and husband.
“So it is a girl…” The soldier shook his head
in disbelief.
“Are you
married?” Tala’s father suddenly asked, hopeful glimmer flickering in his eyes.
“You two look pretty healthy.” The soldier
changed the subject. “Our troops in Tayann could use more recruits.”
Cas and
his father exchanged glances. Apparently, in the midst of the family drama,
they forgot something important. They proceeded to mend their mistake
immediately. Simultaneously, they let out identical pained moans.
“My
hip!” Cas grimaced, as if he was in great pain. He leant on his father for
support. Babak’s hands started shaking inexplicably. In a blink of an eye, two
stout farmers transformed into cripples.
The
soldier looked at Cas and father with compassion.
“All
healthy men got drafted already.” He sighed. “It’s weird though, that there are
so many cripples on Gawanee.”
“It’s
because of starvation.” Tala paused her argument with her mother to explain. As
if to prove her words right, Cas pulled a piece of old bread out of his pocket
and showed it to the soldier.
“All we
have to eat is stale bread,” he said quietly. “We’re so poor and the taxes so
high…”
“The
taxes are too high.” Tala’s entire
family echoed, nodding with absolute conviction.
Tala
shifted her attention from them back to mother.
“What I
was going to say is that I want to
become a scholar. That way, I would be able to serve our Empire!” Tala reasoned
passionately. “I could… I could find a weakness in Tayann’s defense. I could
invent something that could help the Empire win the war!”
“Or
something that would keep pests off our potatoes.” Her father suggested.
“That
too.” Tala rolled her eyes. Her parents thought about nothing but their patch
of land and vegetables. “I wish I could make a difference.”
“I and
your father saved every copper penny we could for your dowry.” Tala’s mother
cried dramatically. Tears welled in her eyes, but were they sincere? “How could
you be so selfish? You’ll be marrying this year! No excuses!”
“I
won’t!” Tala shouted back, stomping with her foot.
She
opened her mouth to argue more, but clenched her jaws. If you don’t have anything nice to say, don’t say anything at all.
Thus, having her father’s advice in mind, she whirled on her heel and made a tactical
retreat - which could be also described as an escape.
“Get
back here!” She heard her mother’s shout, accompanied by her brother’s amused
laughter.
“Happens
every year.” Cas stuffed the stale bread back into his pocket.
His
father sighed heavily, shaking his head in dismay.
“Sure
I’d go for some cheesecake now,” Cas said, when Tala pushed mother away and
stormed away. Challengingly, she glared over her shoulder one last time, her
now short hair wildly swirling around her head like an unruly halo.
“Don’t
come back unless you catch a husband!” Mother shrieked after Tala.
Author's Note:
Please, leave a review. Tell me, what you liked and what you hated about the chapter - every comment is greatly appreciated.
Author's Note:
Please, leave a review. Tell me, what you liked and what you hated about the chapter - every comment is greatly appreciated.
La actitud que tiene al igual que sus metas se parecen bastante a las de Mai(La protagonista de tu otra historia) no se si entre los rasgos de tu personalidad este ser así o te guste bastante que tus personajes femeninos tengan temperamentos fuertes sean tercas y mas bien poco femeninas.
ReplyDeleteYa veremos como se va desarrollando la historia y como mejora tu estilo de escritura a travez del tiempo.
Me gusta hasta ahora el primer capitulo...
tendrá Tala algún romance con un hombre mayor y apuesto ?
Hi!
ReplyDeleteThanks for the review, but it would have been even more awesome if it was in English. I can't quite answer your question, if I don't understand it.